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--- new_horizon_funeral_services [2025/12/18 20:12] – [Overview] admin
+++ new_horizon_funeral_services [2025/12/18 20:17] (current) – [Look and Feel] admin
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   * **Construction Material:** Built from repurposed containers and salvaged parts of the spaceship [[last_frontier|Last Frontier]]
   * **Floors:** 2
-  * **Design Purpose:** Distinct from the darker aesthetic of the competitor Schmitz Funeral Home.
+  * **Design Purpose:** Distinct from the more conservative aesthetic of the competitor Schmitz Funeral Home.
-The façade is dominated by Joe’s distinctive white-painted signage with its rainbow motif, while the entrance is covered by a white cloth curtain instead of a door, reflecting Joe’s minimalist, open-hand approach to grief rituals.
+The façade is dominated by Joe’s distinctive white-painted signage.
 ===== Building Structure =====
-New Horizon Funeral Services is a narrow, two-storey structure with barely enough interior space for the essentials.
 **Ground Floor (Main Level)**
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 ===== Look and Feel =====
-Despite its narrow footprint, New Horizon Funeral Services feels bright, airy, and intentionally uncluttered. Joe Schmitz designed the space as a foil to his brother’s dark, wood-scented parlor. White alloy wall panels catch and diffuse the ceiling’s soft glow strips, filling the compact rooms with a steady, comforting light reminiscent of the Last Frontier’s medical bay.
+Although the building was opened in a former Hoo stable made of old spaceship parts and containers, New Horizon Funeral Service somehow feels inviting — even despite the fact that no one would actually want to be a customer or subject of treatment here if they had a choice.
-A faint lavender scent hangs in the air — Joe’s personal touch — masking the sharp tang of sterilised metal and polished Morningstar wood drifting up from the coffin studio above.
+A faint scent of lavender hangs in the air—Joe's personal touch—masking the sharp smell of sterilized metal and polished Morningstar wood that wafts up from the casket studio upstairs.
-The Memory Room, the heart of the building, feels almost like a small star-chapel: a quiet, luminous space where grief is softened by brightness rather than shadow. Benches fold neatly against the wall when not in use, keeping the room open for intimate ceremonies.
+The Memory Room, the heart of the building, feels almost like a small star chapel: a quiet, bright room where grief is softened by light rather than shadow. The benches fold neatly against the wall when not in use, leaving the room open for intimate ceremonies.
 ===== Roles and Responsibilities =====